Review Detail of Anya29 in Mistress Shinigami (Black Butler FanFic)

4.0 stars, This book has surely made me squirm in some parts >.<. The writing quality is very nice, and I feel that I can relate to the people in the story. For example, I could feel (Y/N)'s emotions when she was crying to Fynlo. Though the story hasn't progressed in it's timeline (Of what I can tell), It's still worth a read. (Plus there will be more updates, and I'm happy for that.) There's always room for improvement, hun. You're character design is pretty good as well. (Though I think I'm starting to get anxious about the new demon character.) I feel like you should be working more on the world background, as I still haven't gotten a grasp of the super early timeline we are in (1600s, I remember?) Over all, I like this very much!