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NEETsemsalvasao
NEETsemsalvasaoLv44yr
2020-07-04 08:23

the story is great. the MC who sucks! the plot is summed up only in helping the protagonist while telling the story of the original plot. the MC is so beta that the author needs to create other reincarnated OCs to be villains because he doesn't want to leave canon.

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Beliel
BelielLv2

The protagonist is also nice. There is nothing wrong with adding some other details apart from the original plot and not directly replacing its protagonist with the protagonist of the fanfic because what they attract are the original stories of the works on which the fanfics are based The way it is written is also not annoying as in other stories where they copy and paste If you are looking for something original it is difficult to find a good one Share some And It is clear that the protagonist is not beta because he is approaching yuki and in a pleasant way trying to form a relationship Finally Until now there is no villain apart from Zouken.

Josephmemes
JosephmemesLv2

Ahh. I see some with the same intelligence as the length of his name, 15.

NEETsemsalvasao
NEETsemsalvasaoLv4

of course there's your mother's ass, and her son.

Josephmemes:Ahh. I see some with the same intelligence as the length of his name, 15.
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