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The premise seems interesting, but I only had to read as far as the main character's name to give up; I have a certain limit for how much suspension of disbelief I'll grant a story, and this one crossed that line faster than any other—congratulations. P.S.: I’m not going to give it a low rating because I dropped the story before it could actually disappoint me.

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That’s why I hate most *House of the Dragon* fanfics—simply because someone with knowledge of the future fails to change the course of the war. Either they don't want to change it because they hope to gain something from the Dance, or they’re just an idiot; there’s no other way around it. Take Daeron, for example: he could have hired an assassin to kill Daemon—or poisoned him—and ended the war before it even began. Or he could have married Aegon off to Baela or Rhaena, ensuring the Velaryons wouldn't participate in the conflict. In fact, given the events surrounding Rhaenys's death, the war shouldn't have even started—or should have ended right then—because you have three adult dragons (Vhagar, Dreamfyre, and Sunfyre) against just Caraxes and Syrax. There’s no way the Sowing of the Seeds could have happened yet, and even if it had, the new dragonriders wouldn't have had any training. George R. R. Martin writes the story based on the consequences of the characters' actions, so if anything had been different, the ending would have been different too.

Bro, out of nowhere I got a feeling that Blazuki had posted a new story, so I went to check—and sure enough, I was right. I haven't actually read it yet, but I'm leaving a 5-star rating just for the psychic message he sent.

Look, this chapter made me give up on this story because it makes no sense; it’s just wish fulfillment. Everything that’s happened so far only happened because you wanted it to—there was no build-up. And then, out of nowhere, you come up with this idea of "oh, I'll spread the word that I'm a nobody so the whole world doesn't turn against me"? Seriously?

I won't lie: ever since this arc started, I've been losing interest in the story. After going two chapters without actually reading anything—just glancing at the last two lines—I think it's a sign that I should stop forcing it and move on. Thanks for the story, and I hope you don't take this personally, but I'm bowing out.

What a shitty Hatsu. I get that it hasn't been fully developed yet, but even so, even the background characters in the Succession Contest Arc have better Hatsus. Plus, it doesn't even fit his personality; it would make way more sense if his Hatsu were more like Sung Jin-woo's than Gecko Moria's—extracting the shadow of someone he killed and using it to create a Nen beast or strengthen his shikigami. That suits the MC's personality—someone who only kills to gain something—much better. And that kind of Hatsu would have huge potential due to post-mortem Nen, since extracting someone's shadow would make the Hatsu stronger than the original.

Thanks for the chapter. I find it funny how people think you're back; they just need to look at the release dates to see that it's one chapter a month.

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I lost interest pretty quickly when I found out that the MC's Zanpakuto's power is the Sharingan. It's one thing for a Shinigami to have the Sharingan, quite another for the Sharingan to be a Zanpakuto. I'm hyper-focused on power mechanics, so this completely ruined my immersion. However, it doesn't seem like a bad story, it's just not for me.