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bro, I swear I tried to read this thing, but it doesn't work, it doesn't work, it doesn't work, holy shit it's just the original story with slightly different dialogues, if this shit wasn't made by chatgpt then it was made by a lazy, "Barbarian" my eggs!

unfortunately without +18, because chatgpt does not write obscenities😢😢😢

The synopsis talks about a more barbaric Mark, but I didn't see that, it seemed to me like the same thing, "everything" happens the same way, I thought wow, a meta essence together with a Viltromite physiology, that's going to be interesting, but it seems to me that chatgpt couldn't grasp the idea, how can someone with a barbarian essence have narcolepsy? How is he smaller than Todd? Why does he still work at Burger King? like the original was because he wanted to buy comics and toys and probably Debby wanted to teach him a life lesson and not give him everything, but this Mark said it's to buy food, holy shit, what's the logic in that, what kind of mother wouldn't buy food for her son, I believe that since the AI doesn't have the capacity to reason the basics, it's not because they live in a normal house that they are middle class, Nola is the strongest hero in the world he is rich, if he wants he can catch a meteor and sell it, or turn a piece of coal into a diamond, and Mark works so he doesn't go hungry?

From my calculations, these stats don't match, this was supposed to be his level after 3 to 4 at most, and not after 9 years, after 9 years this would be the strength someone could reach without needing a system, not to mention that no one would hire a lone mercenary instead of a group, either because fame isn't always reliable or because in most jobs you need to work in a group, be it taking turns guarding at night or to ambush someone without them running away.

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Launch harém +++