Trash Character development: none Writing and grammar: disgusting Plot development: mediocre The story had no character development and then you to decide to give him a side kick/tag-along under the guise of his "best friend" who committed suisse because he died really? He then proceeds to obtain cheat after cheat without any real effort He does things that will literally destroy the timeline and things magically happen in the same way Romances women by just talking Revives people who's death are important to the plots advancement All this happening within 3 or 4 chapters (story is way too fast/rushed) while his sidekick shadows him Although Im not surprised the uncultured readers on this site think this trash disguised as a story is even decent. Overall opinion of the story: Can you even call this a story? It's glorified garbage.
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