Review Detail of Dreamseye in I Freakin` Reincarnated With A System

By the latest chapter i read mc is overpowered. It is not a bad thing really, but an author handling OP character seem fast to come by idea-block. Another reason is we had read many fanfics on naruto, it is so many as it is difficult to find something unique. This story in my opinion is good in general. MC is OP but not going rampage like some emo guy. Adding a sidekick for MC from the same world is not happen that much in another fanfics. Plot is quite interesting as not much different than canon, but if it is become very far different than the canon i suggest keep the plot interesting. You should far ahead make a map of the story to where is it going to. You also make a list "what if" and "the result" very much. Because some other fanfic i read after chapter 20-30 the plot got side tracked or became a boring chapter or MC bacame too OP to continue the story. As for this became a harem or not i dont really have opinion, but limit it as 3-4 women. More than that we the reader sometimes got confused to continue or not. Many story an MC involved very much in harem the plot became boring without lemons, just "he **** them and he satisfied" is justifiable if it ISN'T in the middle introduction of interesting plot. For me the lemons should equal to how many the women. But the quantity of lemons should less than interesting plot of story. Because lemon is added to the dish is to make it tastier, not make lemon dish. Sorry for the rambling in this review, i wish you luck author.👍