No logik here, absolute bullshi.t You a hero if you can finish first chapter... Hard to read. Do not recommend. Avoid at all costs... Face palm at first actions of protagonist in another world. Pure thing, no brain there.
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LIKEI am doing a Rewriting Program on this novel, even as I was rewriting the first chapter I was like... Wtf did I just write, I rewritten Chapter one yesterday and The second one today, if nothing happens it will be a chapter a day at 11. Try rereading it, if it's better That is great! I'd not keep the review how it is thanks.