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CZ2128_DeltaLv65yr
2019-06-16 03:07

not good to read if you have not played the games in the story.. writing style is confusing but readable(try reading it a few times just to get what the author is telling)

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LordSpecter3366
LordSpecter3366Author

I see what you are saying, using the first part of the novel Command And Conquer I did not describe what they look like each individual characters thanks for bringing this up and now that I've looked back and even now its the same assuming people know the game and Move, thanks for telling me I will be changing it and even go back through and fix what I have done so far.

LordSpecter3366
LordSpecter3366Author

I have started the Rewriting Program on the Novel I have remade the First chapter yesterday and the Second today, if nothing happens as I do it will be one chapter everyday at 11, try rereading it, if it's better then I'm glad! If not you can keep the review as it is.

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