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Zefelina
ZefelinaAuthor6yr
2019-04-26 21:34

I will be a bit shameless and review my own story a bit. Though I am not shameless enough to give myself full 5 stars ;] I wrote this story because I think that Harry Potter, as my favorite book, lacks self inserts in fan-fictions. I want this story to be from the perspective of purebloods - why they value their traditions, dark magic and their blood. And why they started the war at all. A lot of the plot will be focused on Draco trying to avoid the 'flags' while not affecting the book's plot. However, whether he succeeds... well that's another question.

Reincarnation: Draco Malfoy

Zefelina
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71 Chs

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NorthernWind
NorthernWindLv10

Bro. Or sis. Actually there are no girls on the internet, bro. Anyways I hope theres no unreasonable steamrolling. Thats what alot of fanfics get wrong. They just usurp the MC's position with a mary sue. The last jedi is a prime example of one such fanfic although it only diminished what they did and didn't cut out most of the major events for past MCs.

6yr
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ipanchu
ipanchuLv4

It's a bromandude.

NorthernWind:Bro. Or sis. Actually there are no girls on the internet, bro. Anyways I hope theres no unreasonable steamrolling. Thats what alot of fanfics get wrong. They just usurp the MC's position with a mary sue. The last jedi is a prime example of one such fanfic although it only diminished what they did and didn't cut out most of the major events for past MCs.
5yr
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VanTranFutureCorp
VanTranFutureCorpLv14

Hermonie is she a love interest or not Author-sama

5yr
Zefelina
ZefelinaAuthor

Not planning to make her a love interest

VanTranFutureCorp:Hermonie is she a love interest or not Author-sama
5yr
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SugarLilRedPanda
SugarLilRedPandaLv13

Harem?

5yr
Zefelina
ZefelinaAuthor

Not a harem

SugarLilRedPanda:Harem?
5yr
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SugarLilRedPanda
SugarLilRedPandaLv13

Yes, 😊😊thank you very much.

Zefelina:Not a harem
5yr
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Rawr_Kitten
Rawr_KittenLv5

Is this harem? If it is let me know so i dont need to read it

5yr
Rawr_Kitten
Rawr_KittenLv5

Dude we all know you plan to harem... a few chapters in hes already flirting up 7 to 8 yr old girls and you even wrote in the comments stuff about how your not sure.... dont lie to get readers i aint gona read a novel about a emotionally dependant mc who cant handle a single thing without validation because of a damn Oedipus complex

Zefelina:Not a harem
5yr
Zefelina
ZefelinaAuthor

He's 11... mentally over 30... you really think he's gonna form a harem with kids? I didn't lie when I said there wouldn't be harem because I personally dislike them. He also met and is friendly with a few boys and some readers are speculating about bxb relationship. Doesn't mean it will happen... same with girls.

Rawr_Kitten:Dude we all know you plan to harem... a few chapters in hes already flirting up 7 to 8 yr old girls and you even wrote in the comments stuff about how your not sure.... dont lie to get readers i aint gona read a novel about a emotionally dependant mc who cant handle a single thing without validation because of a damn Oedipus complex
5yr
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Xisaro
XisaroLv14

So far the way relationships are being handled has been excellent IMO, they feel real. About what I would expect from kids. I usually just put up with harem since it is so prevalent, Its nice when i don't have to. First girl wins appears to have been avoided too, which is usually a plus. As long as it doesn't turn into a will-they-won't-they tease till the end or bxb, I'm good. Keep it up!

Zefelina:He's 11... mentally over 30... you really think he's gonna form a harem with kids? I didn't lie when I said there wouldn't be harem because I personally dislike them. He also met and is friendly with a few boys and some readers are speculating about bxb relationship. Doesn't mean it will happen... same with girls.
5yr
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xunlovesyou
xunlovesyouLv3

Yey! Its not a harem finally😍

5yr
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xunlovesyou
xunlovesyouLv3

You have a good taste author🥰 unlike those trashy author who likes harem🙄always makes it frustrating for me

5yr
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Daoist_Dan
Daoist_DanLv10

If you want shameless try a story with a million views but no 1-2 star reviews(I really did just go through and check). It doesn't matter how perfect a story is because that just doesn't happen naturally on this site. Can't even say it's because they weren't really reviews because again, 1 million views. Someone at some point must have left a genuine review with 1-2 stars and you still deleted it. Now that's shameless. The closest that remains is some guy that reviewed "......................................." with a 2 1/2 star rating. It's neutral and won't affect ratings either way so that must be why it's still here. Your as bad as Ghostyz with this bullsht... They don't let authors manage reviews so you can lie to everyone about having a flawless story. They do it because people spam nonsense for exp. You're abusing the system and it defeats the purpose of review sections. This shouldn't be happening and I hope the site takes the privilege back from you authors soon. There's just no way I can buy this is natural. If it was the math would come out to something like 1 "negative" review to every 100 positive ones which is kind of ridiculous for what it is. Fanfiction is already too opinionated without it being hosted on a site like this one that's always had people with things to say. After 70 chapters someone must have had something to say about what they didn't like especially since I've read some of it and it isn't that great.

5yr
JimmyBlah
JimmyBlahLv14

I hate to ask is there a chance this novel will ever be continued? 🥺

5yr
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Maily_Buele
Maily_BueleLv1

Vas a actualizar ? Es muy interesante tu interpretacion de la historia de Harry Potter y estoy realmente emocionada por esta historia , me gustaria saber si sigues activa en tu historia 😊

3yr
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Sunken_Lotus
Sunken_LotusLv1

Wow, you're really salty.

Daoist_Dan:If you want shameless try a story with a million views but no 1-2 star reviews(I really did just go through and check). It doesn't matter how perfect a story is because that just doesn't happen naturally on this site. Can't even say it's because they weren't really reviews because again, 1 million views. Someone at some point must have left a genuine review with 1-2 stars and you still deleted it. Now that's shameless. The closest that remains is some guy that reviewed "......................................." with a 2 1/2 star rating. It's neutral and won't affect ratings either way so that must be why it's still here. Your as bad as Ghostyz with this bullsht... They don't let authors manage reviews so you can lie to everyone about having a flawless story. They do it because people spam nonsense for exp. You're abusing the system and it defeats the purpose of review sections. This shouldn't be happening and I hope the site takes the privilege back from you authors soon. There's just no way I can buy this is natural. If it was the math would come out to something like 1 "negative" review to every 100 positive ones which is kind of ridiculous for what it is. Fanfiction is already too opinionated without it being hosted on a site like this one that's always had people with things to say. After 70 chapters someone must have had something to say about what they didn't like especially since I've read some of it and it isn't that great.
3yr
SaikoYonebayashi
SaikoYonebayashiLv11

Please add tag " Dropped " at the title, as to make it clear for many other fellow readers , that you stop updating the FantasticFiction , thank you .

1yr
Other Reviews
Retardspawn
RetardspawnLv2

One of the best HP fanfic i've ever read. Nice pace, fkin great world-building AND THE MOST IMPORTANT PART- MC is loveable, smart and has a great development through the story. Oh yeah, if you are interested, it has great grammar and is easy to read even for a foreigners ''cough-cough". Thank's for your hard work.

5yr

Xisaro
XisaroLv14

Until this series, I don't think i have ever been able to read a fan fiction beyond the first few chapters. I binged this over the weekend. I love the view of the Wizarding world from the perspective of a 'pureblood' tempered by the awareness of a transmigrated reader of the books. Almost everything landed for me in this series; -the smarter classier version of Malfoy, -the deep exploration of magic that was never really addressed in the books. -the nuance in the good vs evil/light vs dark perspectives with Malfoy being more grey, -the political and cultural ramifications of muggle born wizards integrating and changing magical society is fascinating. -It changes the purely racist, evil, and unrelateable stance of purebloods in the books to an understandable fear of their culture being lost or destroyed. I even liked the inclusion of differences between pureblood and muggle born magic affinities with both having their advantages. Obviously, there are still the extremist hardliners that are pretty evil but even that has some compelling reasons behind it. I love the exploration of what motivates the characters and the different views they have. As for my personal low points; -The rescue mission in the Egypt arc early on(wasn't terrible just didn't spark my interest). -I get nervous when the story gets close to addressing his transmigration status(could go either way for me). -I get a little annoyed when certain characters (2 of them) misunderstand and ascribe Gryfindorish/heroic traits to the MC when it is in opposition to his actual motives and character. It's rare and usually played for a laugh. (overuse of that one killed another series for me called 'Trash of the Count's Family')

5yr
Cutecookie99
Cutecookie99Lv2

This series is great. It's really interesting seeing things from a pure blood point of view. I think you did an amazing job keeping all the other character personality and how Draco being OP is actually a mix of his hardwork and maturity since he's a 30 years old man. The story is a little slow paced but at the same time builds a whole new universe around Draco so that a good thing. I like how there's interesting new characters that can probably change the course of the story. Please keep the good work.

5yr
HPMan
HPManLv4

This is one of those fanfics that have HIGH QUALITY, but LOW SPEED and you know what?! I fu**ing love that. Because there tons of **** HP fanfics at webnovel, but this one is really amazing. Author creates his own story, not just CTRL+C, CTRL+V. Thank you so much bro, i'll give you all my stones after every update ^^

5yr
Deepsea
DeepseaLv6

I actually like how this story is told with deeper world building. I may not be an expert in grammar but it’s good enough for me. I hope author san keeps up the good work and won’t drop the story.

6yr
maddaddy
maddaddyLv5

Can't get over how well-written this book is. Had on the sidelines for a while and now just can't stop reading it. The buildup of the character in the surrounding World building is amazing. Recommend this book for everyone not just fanfic fans

5yr
Mounish_Vadlapudi
Mounish_VadlapudiLv14

It's got a good character development for Draco, spending time to explain what changes are happening before heading to Hogwarts. The English is good enough for me to follow without any effort. Also I like the fact that the author is spending time to introduce the magical societies from other countries.

5yr
sarki_epik
sarki_epikLv13

Here's my epic review 😉: This is sooooo good. I've read few HP fun- fic, but this novel is a true gem. I really like that MC is NOT op, just normal guy in abnormal situation, trying his best and working hard. Even though we have few rules, laid for us in original story, author really made brilliant world, elaborate all those details that were omitted in original. LOVE IT! And the best is NO HAREM. Thank you author (bows deeply*). I really look forward seeing how the story will develop in the future. Try it, people I tell ya, you will enjoy it!!🤩

5yr
Daoist721221
Daoist721221Lv5

Great Harry potter Self Insert Fan Fiction. I am sad to see there has been no updates in three months.......................................

5yr
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