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KingGrizzly
KingGrizzlyLv105yr
2019-07-01 23:12

I liked it at first. But eventually, it just got ridiculous. The first thing that ticked me off was, he's an old man why the **** would he want to reincarnate, he's lived a good life, just die you old bastard and why the **** does he want a god to be his wife the instant he sees her, reminds me of my dog. After that, it's pretty interesting to read as the dude is stupidly powerful just rarely shows it, he usually acts casually like what you would see in a high school anime. After the good part ends, it just goes downhill, it just strays a lot from the original feel of the novel, it went from happy times with jokes and stuff to 'We can't be together, but wait for me. We will be together when the time comes' and sappy **** like that. Overall you're just wasting your time with the novel, it disappointed me with the change of direction, but who knows it could disappoint you in a different way, yay for surprise depression/disappointment good luck getting your time back.

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KingGrizzly
KingGrizzlyLv10

Btw I haven't read the entire novel nor am I planning too so it could get better, some other reviews say it good so maybe it is, I just cant be bothered to read through to the very end. I'm just going to remember the good parts and leave it at that. Oh yeah, a quick add on to my rant is that some of the harem members are clearly forced into this relationship by a mysterious unknown power called 'plot' where they are soon forgotten by the MC, looking at you Nyx and some other girls that I forgot their names.

DragonGod999x
DragonGod999xLv4

I agree with you bro the story started good but it fell when the **** about there’s a problem we should separate until you’re strong and meet me at the supreme realm like wtf author you just wanted the same as those cultivation novels where there’s a super powerful waifu but because she is powerful she came back to a higher realm and he had to go there to meet her that is a **** plot bro a **** plot there’s no reason for that but he just made the falldown of his fanfic I didn’t understan why I read it until the latest chapter and re-read it and it enraged me because of the plot where they have to be separatfwedd for so long 10+ universes before they will be together forever what **** is that **** this author just gonna drop it completely if he doesn’t change that plot **** this author

DragonGod999x
DragonGod999xLv4

I agree with you bro the story started good but it fell when the **** about there’s a problem we should separate until you’re strong and meet me at the supreme realm like wtf author you just wanted the same as those cultivation novels where there’s a super powerful waifu but because she is powerful she came back to a higher realm and he had to go there to meet her that is a **** plot bro a **** plot there’s no reason for that but he just made the falldown of his fanfic I didn’t understan why I read it until the latest chapter and re-read it and it enraged me because of the plot where they have to be separatfwedd for so long 10+ universes before they will be together forever what **** is that **** this author just gonna drop it completely if he doesn’t change that plot **** this author

DragonGod999x
DragonGod999xLv4

I agree with you bro the story started good but it fell when the **** about there’s a problem we should separate until you’re strong and meet me at the supreme realm like wtf author you just wanted the same as those cultivation novels where there’s a super powerful waifu but because she is powerful she came back to a higher realm and he had to go there to meet her that is a **** plot bro a **** plot there’s no reason for that but he just made the falldown of his fanfic I didn’t understan why I read it until the latest chapter and re-read it and it enraged me because of the plot where they have to be separatfwedd for so long 10+ universes before they will be together forever what **** is that **** this author just gonna drop it completely if he doesn’t change that plot **** this author

DragonGod999x
DragonGod999xLv4

I agree with you bro the story started good but it fell when the **** about there’s a problem we should separate until you’re strong and meet me at the supreme realm like wtf author you just wanted the same as those cultivation novels where there’s a super powerful waifu but because she is powerful she came back to a higher realm and he had to go there to meet her that is a **** plot bro a **** plot there’s no reason for that but he just made the falldown of his fanfic I didn’t understan why I read it until the latest chapter and re-read it and it enraged me because of the plot where they have to be separatfwedd for so long 10+ universes before they will be together forever what **** is that **** this author just gonna drop it completely if he doesn’t change that plot **** this author

kwertyu
kwertyuLv3

you want thise type of novel where mc always bring his harem with him like a pokemon **** for what reason he is stronger than any of them they are no use it's like carrying a sack of rock for no reason

DragonGod999x:I agree with you bro the story started good but it fell when the **** about there’s a problem we should separate until you’re strong and meet me at the supreme realm like wtf author you just wanted the same as those cultivation novels where there’s a super powerful waifu but because she is powerful she came back to a higher realm and he had to go there to meet her that is a **** plot bro a **** plot there’s no reason for that but he just made the falldown of his fanfic I didn’t understan why I read it until the latest chapter and re-read it and it enraged me because of the plot where they have to be separatfwedd for so long 10+ universes before they will be together forever what **** is that **** this author just gonna drop it completely if he doesn’t change that plot **** this author
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