Readers who hate the novel please tone down on the reviews because it's a fucking. Fan fic You say mc is to edgy as ****. watch berserk You say original characters are being degraded it's a fan fic You say mc is a villain then don't read it read a .''better novel'' I've seen trashier mc's than this just my opinion Also please give reasons to justify your reviews it looks like your just trolls giving no respect to people who make the time to type these chapters we read And from a certain perspective you guys look like bitches that whine about everything Giving all five stars to balance it out

It’s really bad the main character is too op and every girl seems to just like him because he’s hot or some **** it’s really bad. Then outta nowhere he makes some plot where his wife and god his father in law were kidnapped or something resulting in the mc becoming a half-assed avenger who want strength but doesn’t even do anything he has no personality and just follows the system and then there’s the harem problem with there being so much speech from those extra clutter characters (Natsu grey happy and now jack sparrow) that the chapters look longer then they really are it’s has no substance he has no goals everything is just stupid it’s like watching first graders acting out a play with them getting lines wrong

Like this novel so far! hmm, what's more? I don't have anything to say aside from "Don't ever drop it!" "Keep the current release schedule" "Hope for more release!" "Keep up the good work!" "Don't do other novel aside from this before it's finished!"

Where should I start well MC is idiotic beyond anything and has zero development in character. Gets Ntr'd and does whatever system tells him just to follow Plot of Cannon. Wants to become strong but doesn't do anything for it. No relationship development unless you consider love at first sight. Pretty bland storyline lost interest it was good concept

Damn 101 review and more than 90 are review are just 5 and 4.5 star sparmer and the only review that is review is the negetive one.so dont bother me just here to balance this ****.

This novel tops as being one of the worst ones. MC is idiotic and has zero development in character. I didn’t understan why I read it until the latest chapter and re-read it and it enraged me because of the plot where they have to be separatfwedd for so long 10+ universes before they will be together forever. I usually like fanfic with OP mc, but how can someone with 75 year of experience act like 10 years old?

Unbearable power trip. Pseudo military mc, who acts like 12 dork. Power balance is ridiculous. 8 wishes doesn't even make sense. Primordial bloodline but east a one piece fruit to get lightning power doesn't make sense. dropped this crap.

Hey pare, love your story.. Whatever or whoever says that your story is not good well, I don't care what they say.. As a fellow Filipino, of corz I support your story.. The story itself is good.. Can't wait for the next worlds/verses

I found the sentences often too hard to stomach. Needs a lot of polishing as the sentences were often nonsensical. As the updates seem fairly frequent, it might be good as a time killer but if you have better things to read, then do that. The MC's character is too childish to be a 70+ yr old man from the army, and despite being lovingly married he did not use a single one of his wishes to bring back his wife. As if watching anime/reading manga/novels degraded him into a high school pervert.