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Review Detail of 3rdFattyWiggles in Reborn as a Indominus-Rex

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3rdFattyWiggles
3rdFattyWigglesLv115yr3rdFattyWiggles

The writer barely puts any effort into the story. The leveling system makes no sense. The MC kills a creature of the same lv as himself and gets 10 levels out of it? makes not sense. He could have just stated that his species gets a massive exp multiplier and I would have been satisfied but the author doesn't. MC has no caution towards his hostile surroundings even when he cold get casually rekt by a high level creature or humanoid. The only remaindering quality of is that the MC fights like a "CLEVER GIRL" but that part of the story is typically never as indepth as i would have liked.

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Reborn as a Indominus-Rex

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Khavos_Rudd
Khavos_RuddLv6Khavos_Rudd

One of those "where do you see yourself 50 chapters from now"

Adolstein
AdolsteinLv13Adolstein

Please we are on a site with ******* who just want to enjoy writing story if you don’t like the story don’t rend it...

3rdFattyWiggles
3rdFattyWigglesLv113rdFattyWiggles

There is nothing wrong with constructive criticism.

Adolstein:Please we are on a site with ******* who just want to enjoy writing story if you don’t like the story don’t rend it...
Stonefist
StonefistLv3Stonefist

How should the author know where he can/should improve himself if nobody criticises his work?

Adolstein:Please we are on a site with ******* who just want to enjoy writing story if you don’t like the story don’t rend it...
TheEternalArtist
TheEternalArtistLv11TheEternalArtist

Have you played games?? Because if you did you would realize when you kill something the same level as you. you like only get like 3-4 levels. Tops!