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NatsumeRikka
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2019-04-26 19:52

Ahhh, such a beautiful story. I feel embarrassed now, for asking you to read my one shot. Writing quality: Sob, it is amazing. The words just flew in and out smoothly and weaved a wonderful story. Updates: I always give 5 stars at those. Story development: No doubt, some had problems with the sudden kill, but honestly, we should also think about the fact that just because the story started with that first chapter, doesn't mean her bullying started from that chapter. She probably has been bullied before and couldn't bear it anymore. I've written something on the same basis, but vaguely. Character design: I can't say anything except, I understand the mc a little too much. World background: It's usually hard to put the world's description in a one shot, but surprisingly it fit very well here. Overall, it's my first time giving a one shot a five stars. Oh man, I'm a little jealous of your writing skills. Sigh, I hope I quickly grow older and become a sixteen year old with writing skills as good as yours.

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