Honest Rating 4. At the time of this review 28 chapters have been written. I'm the author and I truly believe that I've made something special from the new system that took me some time to come with to the streaming experience being shown in word form. Character design and story development are the best I've ever done since I started writing as an author. I think I balanced the dad life and fame life pretty well though this is a review after 28 chapters. Protagonist is a confident, smart, humble but he still has his flaws that will go away as he grows. I lose stars in update stability, pacing and world background which has always been my weakest points Also grammar is a slight problem as I'm kinder dumb. You'll see little mistakes like using the wrong "There" and an odd placement of commas with some other common mistakes. With that being said I think this
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rewrite?
Nope, I used kanji in the original version which caused it to be automatically blacklisted. I had to reupload as I was no longer applicable for the rankings.
newthings:rewrite?
When the MC has magic, is it magic like fireballs or just for show?
For show
Bakkoy:When the MC has magic, is it magic like fireballs or just for show?
Will he not get the supernatural later?
Flat_Moon:For show
SPOILER: Yes, he will, after all, I did introduce the idea that the Space Ink came from a different universe. The chance that he gains a fire ability from a different universe is possible.
Bakkoy:Will he not get the supernatural later?
Okay, thank you author
Flat_Moon:SPOILER: Yes, he will, after all, I did introduce the idea that the Space Ink came from a different universe. The chance that he gains a fire ability from a different universe is possible.
Author Is there clone ***, i really hope he dont use clone for *** cuz thats just weird
Flat_Moon:SPOILER: Yes, he will, after all, I did introduce the idea that the Space Ink came from a different universe. The chance that he gains a fire ability from a different universe is possible.
I ahve some questions.. first will eh make a real harem and not like because he has f*cked many woman second will there be drama like one woman does not want harem and so on and 3 and last will mc marry all his harem members or treat them the same
*have *he sorry for the bad spelling
Thesoultaker88:I ahve some questions.. first will eh make a real harem and not like because he has f*cked many woman second will there be drama like one woman does not want harem and so on and 3 and last will mc marry all his harem members or treat them the same
happened to updates?
im curious about harem part. how many exactly are you planning for it? hopefully it's small one, max 3 or just 2. but then, it's not a harem, just polygamy. it's a spoiler question, but insignificant i think. the focus of your story is about being single dad (as his id name implies), so when i saw harem tag, i became curious and thought it was a contradicting point.
4 or 5 still uncertain but definitely no more.
Vansmoke:im curious about harem part. how many exactly are you planning for it? hopefully it's small one, max 3 or just 2. but then, it's not a harem, just polygamy. it's a spoiler question, but insignificant i think. the focus of your story is about being single dad (as his id name implies), so when i saw harem tag, i became curious and thought it was a contradicting point.
hey, i've been an avid reader of this the first moment i saw it, however with your resent +18 chapter it took a dive with conflicting personalities and felt rush just to get to the steamy scene. if you want you the next time you write a +18 you can contact me and I can read it first and give you my opinion on it, so maybe you can make any changes you feel before post. I'm a fan of this and I hope it can go long and be fun till the end
Yo flat moon, how are you doing today ?
can you explain wtf is meant to be happening with the magic in a world with super powers maic isn't impressive
keeps seeing tags of harem I suggest don't do it every story with a harem is a pathetic excuse for the author to share his fantasy's it in every case I've seen ruins a story
author , you ever coming back to this ?
