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Realistically, won't people test the meats when the product floods the market? I like the scene where MC takes back dino eggs and cooked it himself. But majority chinese fic tends to ignore real life issues like that, especially when it's concerning *black tech (i e system). It's a disadvantage from rushing to finish target (oftentimes, daily update and not a real professional in their own writing background).

it's unrealistic when military meal packages from WWII can still be found in recent years, not to say if he keeps selling it in years to come and this is high core scientific verse (marvel). That's the problem of this kind of genre, writing urban stories but ignoring real life issues, making it hard to believe/immerse into reading. Does it count as nitpicking? But the issue still plagues me when reading this kind of story, eventually dropping them.

Just binged this since yesterday, and honestly, I'm not expecting this to be this good. You balance every aspect that I think is exceeding my expectation when I read this type of fanfic. Your choice of movies he stars in are truly non cliches (beside HP IP of course), haven't watched any of them, and that's a good point from me. On another note, I just wish you won't copy other works that have already walked before you (i.e choice for female side or otherwise lead character, and how every female he interacts with became his potential pairing in one way or another with end goal becoming reality). That's a deal breaker for me, because it's already written too many times. Just another one, it's just too smooth, his journey to stardom. Conflict ends fast, no big consequences for his action. I guess, age is his strong protection so far. Not to forget about his past life experiences (other celebs' life experiences, of what the public knew). Hopefully, his budding conflict of interest with WB may lead to something, just don't make him omnipotent when you make him overwhelm every antagonistic element he may face in the future, especially when he aged into adulthood. That's the wider world worth digging content.

I'm guessing it's physical even if Troy projects something else in his monologues (inner or otherwise). Their romance has a little scene to develop deeper feelings imo, not like with Emma or Emely's.

If this is his primary reason, then forget my previous comment.

Man, idk how Troy preference goes downhill like that. First Emma, then Emily, but Rihanna? Seriously, that's just a massive jump out there, and you portray Troy as truly a teenager here, would he date or worse yet take his first step with Rihanna even if he knew she would be an international singer? That's just so random and not consistent with how overly sensitive he is to the inner feeling. He knew Emma as her adult self, Emily also, but see Rihanna now? Just questioning his taste, it's really random imo, not how he viewed feelings above base instinct.

Don't keep your pic on iCloud, remember the scandals.

Late, but Emma Stone for a latecomer seems perfect for final pairing. She won't become famous early and doesn't have messy experiences like S. Johansson for example. Watson has the same labels as Taylor Swift in fanfic (too many ex), while Stone is fairly clean in my opinion (little scandal). Having a fling with those actresses who had done nak*d scenes isn't necessary as other fics already done that already. Finally with his past experience with his biological mom, I bet that scar would stay with him, especially in choosing a partner.

Next would be the laying foundation in Asia.

alright, appreciated man.