Review Detail of MyCharacterLeads in Darling in the Mask

First of all, I would like to extend a congratulatory remark for spending efforts of writing this novel.👏 Writing quality. Though it's readable, you need to proofread it again. Grammatical errors were visible like the wrong way of using commas (e.g. He, quickly and discreetly - no need for comma - He quickly and discreetly) Typos errors ('She new' instead of 'she knew') She held the man's hand instead of She held the mans hand. (If it doesn't have apostrophe between the man and s, it will sounds like a lot of man.😂) Updates. Don't have a problem Story development. Though I get and understand the whole idea, it was a bit fast paced. There's something missing when I read it. Character design. I found the ML cute when he want the FL's attention. And i found the FL's reactions normal. She might be hesitant to her feeling to the ML, but it was just normal when you knew that the one you love know how to kill. That's a terrifying fact. What more will she feel when she know that his an assassin? Poor Zhi! They might be more convincing if what they felt and thought will be put up more effort. 'Show' how they felt instead of 'Telling' (e.g. when Zhi and the K-pop guy dance, it was just stated that they dance. I suggest to be more specific, like if they were dancing like a couple. And be descriptive to this part to emphasize how would one felt if they saw their love dancing with another guy. That would be more convincing.😉) World background. nothing to say as it was in modern era. Hope this help!😄 This novel has a its own unique story.👍 Keep it up author.. Fighting!😉😉