Review Detail of PsyberRose in Darling in the Mask

At the time of writing, there were only 7 Chapters, and part of a review swap. It's an interesting story and a slightly different twist to the normal CEO-girl love story. The CEO is a cold-blooded assassin that is apparently starting to be human agian with FL. Writing Quality: English isn't my first language and I'm not very particular with grammatical or spelling mistakes. So long as the reading is smooth and understandable, I am fine with it. Having said that, there are a few glaring ones like you would sometimes use "your" when it should be "you're" - and that is strange because it's not a mistake you make throughout. So, I guess you must have missed some? I recommend you to re-read your Chapters a few times after you write it, and maybe even re-read it after you publish it. Sometimes, re-reading doesn't only help you catch some errors (I still miss some despite reading it several times), it also gives you some more insight as to how to improve what you first wrote, or even give you ideas about the next plot line. Stability of Updates: 5* in good faith. Too early to tell. Story Development: It's progressing nicely and you already get an idea of what the whole thing is going to be about. That is a plus for me as I don't quite like to read several chapters while wondering, 'What is going on' or 'Where is the author going with this?'. Mind you, this is just my own personal preference. Character Design: ML is more endearing than FL at the moment. FL seems a bit fickle, or perhaps, she's just being the typical confusing woman? I dunno, that's the impression I get - and that means, you have managed to flesh the characters out for me. I can see what they're like, so they're not 1D. World Background: Nothing much to say, as it is the normal setting of Earth etc. All in all, a great effort and lots of potential. All the best, Author. ♡〜٩(^▿^)۶〜♡