Review Detail of PeachyPearl in C: Summoner & Magic

I'm impressed. With a lot of things going on in short chapters, at some places I felt too amazed to take my eyes off. The writing style though needs some polishing but it's quite good. I really hope that you can either finish the novel before your national service or you don't drop it even after going there. Please continue writing. Keep it up author. I'm rooting for you and I am pretty sure I will be one of your regular readers. Thank you for creating this fascinating world.