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I can feel a mystery vibes out here!đ World background was beautifully written. (The whole botany thingy made me feel I came back to my college life haha) Introducing the characters were quite unusual. (Usually, the past of a character was introduced one by one. But, this seems thier past will be introduced in one go.) Writing was finely done. Not too deep means that a lot of readers will be able to understand it. (Just few missing quotation marks) (I'm not sure about this, but as far as I know, using Sir/Ma'am before a name was common thing, like Ma'am Zia or Sir Luke. Zia ma'am was unusual to me.) Keep writing!đ P.S. Love that girls' instinct.. deducing that Luke likes Zia and something â¤ď¸â¤ď¸ will happen after the camp.. haha her students were truly amazing.
Trapped in Time
RenuKakkar
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Thanks for the review. All cannot sleep as they are not in their comfort zone. There is no internet, no youtube, no social networking sites. Yes, at this stage from Chapter 6, I am devoting a chapter for each character that means 14 chapters to describe the past of the characters and their aspirations. I can do that as now they are in their sleeping bags with nothing to do but think about each other, their families and themselves.
Sir Luke would mean a title which is not so here, but Luke Sir is for respect to teachers. Yes, students have always been clever and psychic. No one actually notices this. If they are attached to a particular teacher they can gauge their emotions.
RenuKakkar:Thanks for the review. All cannot sleep as they are not in their comfort zone. There is no internet, no youtube, no social networking sites. Yes, at this stage from Chapter 6, I am devoting a chapter for each character that means 14 chapters to describe the past of the characters and their aspirations. I can do that as now they are in their sleeping bags with nothing to do but think about each other, their families and themselves.
RenuKakkar:Sir Luke would mean a title which is not so here, but Luke Sir is for respect to teachers. Yes, students have always been clever and psychic. No one actually notices this. If they are attached to a particular teacher they can gauge their emotions.