Review Detail of Angelyay in Trapped in Time
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Overall the story quite good, however there are quite a few errors and inconsistencies in the story, I like the botany PhD since it isn’t a cliche, the students were introduced all together but I feel like it would’ve been better to individually introduce them as the story goes on so the reader doesn’t have a sudden influx of information
Trapped in Time
RenuKakkar
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Thanks for the review. I had read books of world famous authors in the past. There novels were made into films. One of them used to just mention the characters and the crisis within the first few chapters. Then he would take up the life history of the characters one by one in the next 2-3 chapters and bring it to the crisis stage. So, if there were 10 characters, he would have 20 chapters @ 2 each. After that he would get back to the crisis and how they all managed. I am doing the same. 5 chapters have been done with. Now I will proceed with the 14 characters. Then back to story.
RenuKakkar:Thanks for the review. I had read books of world famous authors in the past. There novels were made into films. One of them used to just mention the characters and the crisis within the first few chapters. Then he would take up the life history of the characters one by one in the next 2-3 chapters and bring it to the crisis stage. So, if there were 10 characters, he would have 20 chapters @ 2 each. After that he would get back to the crisis and how they all managed. I am doing the same. 5 chapters have been done with. Now I will proceed with the 14 characters. Then back to story.