Review Detail of Sigheti in deleted_book_

At first glance, the grammar is a bit off, but these things only improve the more you write, and I spotted fewer mistakes the further I read. The style gives off a casual vibe and even though I’m not a big fan of the capitalised words, I’m not planning to consider this in the overall rating as it is a choice that is made by each writer individually. Concerning the characters; to me, the beginning seemed a bit forced but it gradually became more fluid and polished. I applaud you for being able to make me empathise with the main character, I’m torn; my first instincts want to tell her to grow up. On the other hand, I believe it’s quite entertaining to see her struggle with her feelings. It’s ok to make stupid mistakes and fall for people you didn’t expect to fall for, Sara, we’re all still young after all. In the end, I believe this story to be really enjoyable. I was able to relax and be pulled into a romantic drama with a promising plot. Have fun continuing your work!