The story is pretty generic with nothing really popping out to set it apart from other similar novels on the site. Additionally, the chapter sizes are quite small, and quality is pretty sub par (par for the course on this site). Sentence structure is all over the place with an entire paragraph being one gigantic run-on sentence. So much could be fixed by a skilled editor.
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