webnovel
xiao_yue
xiao_yueLv24yr
2020-03-21 17:02

excellent character design but the first 50 chapters are torture I never heard of an MC that suffered so much I am sure the author is M LOL 😂😂 I'd really like to read another one of your novels With a protagonist more OP My life is too sad to read how they beat the boy up all the time.

Liked by 4 people

LIKE
empty img

No replies. Be the first!

Other Reviews
ThatONE
ThatONELv1

TO not gave much away here is what to expect before reading Starts off good and you get a scrawny kid uses mind to climb to better life as slave. Faces hardship grows and the torture gets to him turns him seeking hurt (Masochist). Foriegn forces intereferes yet he perseveres. All of a sudden things go down from their. As the author claims he pays good deeds and bad deeds. NOT true. At a point you take him as an Evil MC and accept his action. Somethings I can not accept is to empower his enemy and also to give up on his friend/saviour and gets same enemy more girls by spending a lot of money. I could accept all his evil, but this was my bottom-line. There might be some clever scheme of MC or whatever but when the person involved in this perhaps the only relatable, human person that helped the MC it is no longer something I can endure. Good luck with your work and continue on. You are a good writer unfortunately the story is no longer for me. Do not be discouraged, this is not my niche story. Below is a summery of why I gave up, it contains spoilers. 1 - MC starts off a slave and you wish him well 2 - MC climbs in rank - gets pushed into situation by F where everyone dies 3 - MC survives barely with the help of F's *** slave M 4 - He gets know M and kisses her, they are close now 5 - She wishes to be free - he tries and helps her 6 - He gets out of situation but does not really take revenge, In facts delays it (You can assume he is a masochist for it to understand ) 7 - He later goes some where and does some stuff taking more punishment, heartache turns to a welcoming mat 8 - He had some fights looking good for him, but his plans fail because of an annoying person, but uses a mother figure to get back affection 9 - story gets good, he is not a zombie that getting spit on, but haves fun with an alter-ego 10 - M who has saved him is given to F her old owner, F who also wanted to kill him is improved with his unique gift and MC schemes against M - He gives F another beutiful girl, when things do not go his way - he is now against M to make her jelous and alone, so she can run back to her old owner.

Related Stories

What? System Wants Me To Steal MILFs To Become Stronger!

【 Warning : Mature Content R-18 】 "What do you mean by I need to steal MILFs to become stronger!?" Waking up in an unfamiliar body of a Prince, Lucian stares in bewilderment as a transparent panel materializes before him, displaying a message that demands — "You need to steal MILFs to become stronger!" His mind races with confusion. What does that even mean?? As the absurdity of his new reality sinks in, he begins to accept the dark possibilities before him. In his previous life, as a master seducer, no beauty had ever escaped his demonic embrace. Now, with this new body, he savors the thrill of his newfound power. Their desires will become my playground, and their most sacred secrets will be mine to exploit. "You’re the Empress? I'll grant you a divine body if you submit to me." "Your lover is a once-in-a-thousand-years genius? So what? I’ll make you a prodigy that comes once in a million." "Your husband is the sect leader of a powerful immortal sect? Irrelevant. I’ll elevate you to become an immortal goddess." To claim the fate points of the 'Sons of Heaven,' Lucian will seduce their cherished ones and drain their divine essence. ============================= 【 Additional Tags: Incest, Harem, System, R-18, Mature, Reincarnation, Anti-Hero, Shameless Protagonist, Overpowered Protagonist, Immoral Protagonist, Dual Cultivation, Vampire, Demons, Elves, Devil, Gods, Goddess, Politics, Comedy, Face-smacking. 】 【 Author's note: You can expect a lot of smut. If any of this bothers you, this is not for you. 】 【 Discord link - https://discord.gg/Vnnfy5vjda 】 【 250 Powerstones = 1 Bonus Chapter 】 【 50 Golden Tickets = 2 Bonus Chapters 】 【 Magic Castle = 10 Bonus Chapters [Release within next 30 days] 】 【 Bonus Chapter(s) will be updated at the start of the next month 】 【 Cover is not mine 】

MOONshadow_ · Eastern
4.8
133 Chs