The world and the arcs as of ch83 are descriptive and well built. The story pacing is okay. But my main problem is that the Mc for a genius has a brain that isn't functioning most of the time. This is mostly done to hinder the Mc development and standing and getting some suspense into the story. I have no problem with dumb Mc's, I am quite fond of Luffy(One Piece) after all, but I hate it when an author tries to sell me an idiot as a Genius. And he is seemingly only made an idiot to limit his op ability.
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As I have mentioned in the first chapters on behalf of the masters, Laurel is a tempestuous hot-blooded guy. For many, emotionality is the opposite of rationality, and for the most part it is true. Synergy acts as a supercomputer in his head, but it does not affect his character in any way. MC is basically a genius of Synergy, not his way of thinking. He has a warm side (his heart) and a cold side (Synergy). It’s only natural that his behavior is often ambivalent. He often acts impulsively, pursuing his selfish interests. However, sometimes he makes brilliant plans and looks like a cool-headed rationalist. His two incompatible qualities in one character are rather convenient for the author to create the plot, but they might confuse the readers more often than not, and small wonder. Don’t judge too hard. Of course, the book is not without glitches or gaps, but I am working on them. Thanks for the comments and ideas.
Quite a shame, oh well.
Well, it also makes it worth reading... Though I'm expecting a massive change in MC in the future.
xianxia is full nonsensical and irrational things that make no sense... this is one of the major ones... dumb but genius characters
