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Jixyakku
JixyakkuLv45yr
2019-07-23 11:34

I absolutely love the world background of this book, but I've gotta ask... What were you thinking when you added that random powerful woman who just appeared and did whatever the **** she wanted when all that was happening was him opening his keys? Other than that this book is awesome!

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Wing_Span
Wing_SpanAuthor

Thank you for your opinion! There is a deep meaning and clear logic behind the appearance of that woman. She managed to find him in the whole universe just because he had become a competitor of the heritage of human ancestry. I hope next time your assessment will be higher than 4 stars.

peace01
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heritage of human ancestry... can you please elaborate on that?

Wing_Span:Thank you for your opinion! There is a deep meaning and clear logic behind the appearance of that woman. She managed to find him in the whole universe just because he had become a competitor of the heritage of human ancestry. I hope next time your assessment will be higher than 4 stars.
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ThatONE
ThatONELv1

TO not gave much away here is what to expect before reading Starts off good and you get a scrawny kid uses mind to climb to better life as slave. Faces hardship grows and the torture gets to him turns him seeking hurt (Masochist). Foriegn forces intereferes yet he perseveres. All of a sudden things go down from their. As the author claims he pays good deeds and bad deeds. NOT true. At a point you take him as an Evil MC and accept his action. Somethings I can not accept is to empower his enemy and also to give up on his friend/saviour and gets same enemy more girls by spending a lot of money. I could accept all his evil, but this was my bottom-line. There might be some clever scheme of MC or whatever but when the person involved in this perhaps the only relatable, human person that helped the MC it is no longer something I can endure. Good luck with your work and continue on. You are a good writer unfortunately the story is no longer for me. Do not be discouraged, this is not my niche story. Below is a summery of why I gave up, it contains spoilers. 1 - MC starts off a slave and you wish him well 2 - MC climbs in rank - gets pushed into situation by F where everyone dies 3 - MC survives barely with the help of F's *** slave M 4 - He gets know M and kisses her, they are close now 5 - She wishes to be free - he tries and helps her 6 - He gets out of situation but does not really take revenge, In facts delays it (You can assume he is a masochist for it to understand ) 7 - He later goes some where and does some stuff taking more punishment, heartache turns to a welcoming mat 8 - He had some fights looking good for him, but his plans fail because of an annoying person, but uses a mother figure to get back affection 9 - story gets good, he is not a zombie that getting spit on, but haves fun with an alter-ego 10 - M who has saved him is given to F her old owner, F who also wanted to kill him is improved with his unique gift and MC schemes against M - He gives F another beutiful girl, when things do not go his way - he is now against M to make her jelous and alone, so she can run back to her old owner.

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