Author you don't have brain. Chakra is not something available in any world. You should give a proper explanation for that. Getting 3v wish ask for 3 wish more When god started having their brain dead. Senju bloodline is too underrated Uchiha is not that op As mangekyo have blindness problem For ultimate need a brother eye For rinnegan need sage of six path son reincarnation So sharingan op , my foot. I born , see mother. Father And just overreacted Man he was an ***** right before Or a child of 5 or 10. Or actually author you have problems of disorder. Angel is happy to be sealed Is she machochist. Man even god can't be spared in your dog **** story. So I got angry , very very angry. OK ,. First thought for mother a and even written by authors Oh , booooobbbbbsss. Chick , don't you have A family or parents. I think you don't Or u r those failures Who live all their life in just A room. Bye lovely otaku machochist mother ****er boy.

Really is great! Just started reading it, but it seems good so far. Plus the translations are grammatically accurate most of the time which gives it more attention in the publication industry. Sure hope to read more!

At first, I was pretty hyped by the synopsis and even by the character before his reincarnation. But after that, I simply didn't understand what you wanted to do with the story, it goes in every direction. The characters are not well developed if not weird at some point. Also, a lot of things done by the MC are not explained, not to us but the other characters and they find it completely normal. It's like you wanted to tell a lot of stories at the same time and ended with that, you know it's not because cheese and chocolate are good that it's better mixed. The only reason for me to not put 0 is for your writing quality, at least from what I see there are no grammatical errors, but I'm french so I can't really tell. I also think that you tried to go too fast in writing the story and didn't have time to think about the plot, so don't hesitate to take your time in writing and re-reading even if it's longer the quality will improve. (**: that's only my theory maybe it's not like that at all). I hope my review will help you to improve and write a better story. Good luck

Bro............You're doing a nice job.......Keep it up.................................. ....... . . .. ... . . .. . ... . ...................

Awesome op character. With quite interesting plot the reading is easy as Grammer is good and I hope to see new chapters soon good luck for future author

the story may seem interesting at first but it will become disgusting, (in addition to beautiful women who become men) many beautiful women in these worlds and there can be no HAREM. The ustor loves yaoi.

Grammar is pretty good in this novel, so far so good, give this novel a chance! -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Weak writing quality, chaotic development of story at later chapters, bad choice of heroine at least for that MC i have nothing to momo thou, characters literaly lack character like there was none showed as original character features in mc and oc's, No world background what's over just what author think is cool thrown together withour any explanations or world laws...

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