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rolas
rolasLv145yr
2019-04-28 03:25

it's a good story once you get over the first few chapters. the author has a talent to make us feel inferior, so many will hate the first few chapters. it gets a lot better afterwards and is really interesting. SPOILER: black light sabers.......... how cool as **** is that? i mean they are light sabers but they are black! *mindblown* they're going to saber rape every jedi and sith just with that. i mean B! L! A! C! K! light sabers. ****. its cool. and cringy at the same time. will they be called chaotic force users? or emo force users? only the force can tell. the only thing we need now is a skull throne and more blood for the blood god! altough there is no mention of my personal favorites (system and what never should be missed a harem, becacuse no harem no life) which results in a 1 star minus, this is just my preference. none the less, it's a good story and very well written for a free story. thank you author. keep up the good work. Motherf****** BLACK light sabers. dude. ****. it's like blown tha mind you know. fantastic idea. see that samuel gay jackson. (sorry dude but you should have turned down that role once the color of your gay as f*** light saber was known. it's f****** violet..... i mean, did you want to be a joke? or where you just drugged up liike motherfucking hobo?)

The Arrival

Killmorger
4.6
58 Chs

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Lord_Shiva_
Lord_Shiva_Lv14

you do know that there a black lightsaber in star wars right?

5yr
3
Daoistblackwind
DaoistblackwindLv5

its been 2 months tell else if its dropped or not dont keep us waiting

5yr
Everything_Forever
Everything_ForeverLv14

Harems are stupid so you are stupid.

5yr
Harem_fan
Harem_fanLv5

With all the men die-in from being to macho building a harem helps the ladies.......

Everything_Forever:Harems are stupid so you are stupid.
5yr
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Bloody_Sage
Bloody_SageLv5

Reveal spoiler

5yr

Holy_Roon
Holy_RoonLv5

please update this great story ! ........................................................................................................................................

4yr
juanultimopoder
juanultimopoderLv4

please update ...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

4yr
CrowIey
CrowIeyLv4

A story with a huge potential, I recommend that you give this story a chance if you like Star Wars, the author is also dedicated to the quality of writing and the speed of launching new chapters.

5yr
Descentofpotential
DescentofpotentialLv15

Can you please update, I dislike cliff hangers or novels being dropped please write another if you would be so kind. ppppppppplllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

4yr
InkSavant
InkSavantLv10

Paragraph format, grammar and punctuation is getting a lot better and has improved greatly since the beginning of the novel. The novel is getting even more interesting than before. However I wish the author would focus more on the main character, but I like the world building since its not completely the Star Wars Universe. 10/10 would replace Lunarbase with Death Star.

5yr
TheTravelingDaoist
TheTravelingDaoistLv15

Bro I need to know if you’re gonna update this story😭. Now to those reading the reviews. This is by far, my favorite fan fiction of star-wars. This author has good knowledge on the Star Wars world and I recommend giving this one a try.

4yr
DivinityShiro
DivinityShiroLv14

It is a great Star Wars fan-fic novel in this app. I left the overall rating 4 star. Because, there are minor errors in punctuation or let say the writing quality, "For some might be bothered with the lines". I can't ask for more, because this is great story to begin with, wishing you the best author. 3000/10 Story development.

5yr
Fiftypenguine657
Fiftypenguine657Lv13

This is one of the best fanfics i have read to date. I need More. I look forward to if/when it gets some more updates. I cant wait to see where this novel goes next.

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