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InkSavant
InkSavantLv105yr
2019-04-07 10:22

Paragraph format, grammar and punctuation is getting a lot better and has improved greatly since the beginning of the novel. The novel is getting even more interesting than before. However I wish the author would focus more on the main character, but I like the world building since its not completely the Star Wars Universe. 10/10 would replace Lunarbase with Death Star.

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Killmorger
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How did you know about that did you hack my computer or something stop give out sporilers

InkSavant
InkSavantLv10

Roger, roger.

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Melshan
MelshanLv7

The MC Will have a wife?

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Hunter_Rodgers_3462
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pls wifey

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holosagewolf32
holosagewolf32Lv15

are you alive? please say something. i miss your work so much and check weekly for any posts on the story.

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