Item: One piece: DarkStar pirates
Rating: 5
Author: Theodoric_Jager

Theodoric_JagerLv145yr

2019-04-30 20:03

Hello, Greeting readers and author if you are there. This is my first review. *Gasp*... Yeah I know.... It's not that surprising. Anyways, I can't really put it to good words or something that can be perfectly explained. For a Fan-Fic... It's fucking amazing. The story, the progression, the characters and the excitement it all just.. I don't how to put it in words, it's beautiful, truly beautiful, magnifico. Since I am a big fan of One Piece, since it is the first anime but not the last I'll be watching. For a Fan-Fic of One Piece I didn't hate or despise it yet I enjoyed it with a smile. That is my review simple, easy, quick, understandable (unless you got issues... or maybe I do). Best Regards, No one really

One piece: DarkStar pirates

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