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2019-04-06 01:08

like this novel, from the start it's been promising. characters that make the story more interesting. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Good Novel --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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Buinola
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Well to begin with, this is a fanfic of Reverend Insanity, one of the best quality novel in this entire platform (in my opinion). In the original work Fang Yuan, the protagonist, is a very determined and admirable man who faces off against the world itself, concocting clever table-turning schemes to even the odds with powerful enemies. And that's not all, what sets him apart from those other so called "logical" fags that most of the time poses as the protagonist, is that he isn't afraid to dirty his hands unlike most so called "determined" and freedom-seeking protagonists who are bound by their own their own morals, like the moral fags they are, always flaunting their justice boner on your face. Unfortunately, this version of Fang Yuan barely resembles the original. In this version he has apparently changed his goal from the grand goal of achieving immortality to chasing skirts and playing around with some insignificant mortals. With the reason that he comes into an epiphany that he should chase his desire as he has become a Supreme being, in other words obtaining immortality. But you see, he gets this ephipany when he is DYING, meaning that he haven't obtained immortality, yet he abandon that driving force that drives him since the beginning of the original novel, when he haven't even obtained it. Other than that, the grammar of this story is... not the worst, but it definitely isn't the best either. What I'm trying to say is that the grammar still needs some improvements. There are still quite a number of grammatical mistakes scattered across the story. I originally wanted give this a 2 star on the basis that this fiction is a mockery of Fang Yuan's character and what the original is all about but then again this is a reverend insanity fanfic. And if there is one good thing about this fanfic, is that the protagonist isn't some white knight fag or some edge lord, trying to save the world or something, so cheers for that. Overall I give this a 3 for effort and for not turning Fang Yuan into an overused moral fag protagonist. On another note, I also have noticed that I'm rambling way too much on this review, so for whoever is reading this up until this point, I wish you a good day.

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