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The story started well, had some world background, mc making though not the best but just somewhat reasonable choices(like not focusing on skills and focusing on leveling up) but it can be somewhat ignored. So it continues like that for a while until the part where he evolves into a spiritas. I don't know how a character can change so drastically. I have read some really horrible books but even they don't have such a drastic change in character in a single chapter. One moment he is a somewhat intelligent stick and then next moment he is a stuttering idiot who (it is then mentioned that he is a 16 y old virgin) loses the ability to think and reveals every bit of his secrets to someone he just met (just because he thinks that they are 'compatriots' and totally were not forcing him a moment ago). Tells them that he is getting skills knowing fully well that it will be tough to explain how he knows the details and yet revealing it very easily, as easy as breathing. (Why do you want to go to the ruin ? Oh, nothing much. Just want to get some op skills that I can keep to myself for some advantage but now I telling you this because you are my friend and don't ask why I know,not telling you ). And when asked about is he is blessed by a god, he easily reveals it and even goes on to tell his story pretty eagerly and with great details(since they are compatriots of course). He reveals to a stranger he met some time ago about secrets one would take it to their graves, like being a human and getting reincarnated. Anyway, if it wasn't enough to leave a bad taste we have a mc who gets flustered by imaginging stick on stick when Herelia or something mentions something and behaves just how I imagine a 16y old would be and then we learn that he is a 16y old virgin. See, I have no problem with any kind of stick and personally love it but was it really needed to make the mc be a 16 y old virgin just for the sake of having a reason to be flustered?. From the start of the story I was expecting the mc to be 21 or older guy since he was behaving in a somewhat rational way?. Anyway, I think this is my second time reading it. The first time I read this was a long ago. It was these few chapters where he met Herelia that bothered me so much with the drastic character changes that I dropped it. And after so long I tried it again, I really wanted to give it a chance, read from the beginning..I really tried. But this part again made it so much unbearable for me to continue even a sentence. I really felt my brain throb and stop with every word I read( mostly how easily he revealed everything to a stranger where he could answer with a yes). I love books. When you invest so much feelings and time into something and get smacked straight on your face with something illogical and irrational, it really makes you doubt your life for a second. The author seems nice enough to take criticism in a good way, so I hope they improve because we really need some good writers. Every story I read leaves me with so much disappointment and unmet expectations, it is heartbreaking

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I Reincarnated As A Stick

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unfortunately, it'll be a very long time until i rewrite the beginning of this novel, whether i want to or not. i sincerely apologize if that's how you feel about the novel. i hope you find something more worth your time in the future.

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i don't know this will help out in any way, but that specific chapter was made over 2 years ago. from that statement, you probably already know what i'm hinting towards.