Item: Cultivation with the Sharingan
Rating: 3.6
Author: Daoist896408

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2020-01-13 18:16

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Cultivation with the Sharingan

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Do you know how confident I am in my writing for a somewhat fan-fic? Mad confident. Like even if my writing was a level lower, it would still be much better than more than half of the original works/fan-fictions. Stability? Pffft. If I can't think of something original, there is always that cliche plot which most people seem to find as a guilty pleasure, so you'll be fine! Story development? Lol please, read the first chapter and tell me do you get the usual flashback of the "I met God by dying on the way home by truck-kun and yadadada," no. 👏STRAIGHT👏TO👏THE👏POINT👏 Character Design! Mindless Harem? Ew, I'd rather go watch some hentai or something. But I love the arrogant young master cliche though, let's be real here, face-smacking is gold. World Background. Let me tell you this, 👏CULTIVATION👏NOVEL👏 Yeah, you already know there will be multiple worlds and I promise you, I will do my serious best to make it seem realistic, fantasy-wise of course, so you can picture things better.

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