Writing Quality: Your writings understandable and readable with punctuation and grammar (better than 80%-90% of novels) and there's little to no spelling errors I've seen for now. Stability: Can't rate it well because there are only 3 chapters but it's looking good so imma give it the benefit of the doubt Development: You've shown what the MC is capable of early on and shown what his eyes and wishes can do and the benefits they grant in 2 chapters which many fail to do with 10. Characters: Your keeping to the strength based world like the soul refinement guy looking down upon those weaker then him and his enemies giving up cause it's hopeless World background: Story is holding up and looks like your adding kingdom aspects into this (which is my sweet tooth) along with the steady development of the world instead of jumping 20 chapters every 3 lines
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Awesome review. Thanks for reading man, you should join the discord xd
