Review Detail of AdmiralAlcon in Inevitable Road To Divinity

Overall nice novel! Writing Quality: 3/5. You should keep the consistency of your paragrafs more or less the same. I noticed that some times your paragrafs are soooo long. Try to keep them smaller for better reading. And try to separate dialogs from normal text so that thay are not so connected( sometimes it's hard to read because of that) Updates: 5/5. ;) Story: 5/5. The best part in my opinion. Character: 4/5. Very good but You should take some time with Your characters. It feels a bit rushed. World: 5/5. Excellent in my opinion.