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farmer_with_dimple
farmer_with_dimpleLv114yr
2020-11-14 08:18

the book had potential but it was limit by the author inexperience. this book is mostly direct for the aged of 16 and 19(horny boys). I only got thru 20 chapter before dropping it. The way ***, rape cultivation, even the world background is depicted signals the author lack of imagination! As the author writes more and read other works, this may change in the future. maybe my review is harsh and bias because of the books I have read before this. I won't deny that if I was a typical 16-19 year old this book probably entertain me.

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