Review Detail of Aeternabilis in Chairman of The Magic Council

Okay, so there are a couple of things. First, the grammar is terrible, HOWEVER, you do see some improvement in it so hopefully, that continues. Second, for me, the mc is way too young from the title I assumed he would be older compared to the rest of the cast. This would then perfectly fit in with his romance with ur. I mean I kinda want to see the mc x ur as the only pairing. Then he could have ultear as his daughter etc. Only my preference but think it would have fit with the story much more. I mean the only way they can be together is if ur is stuck in the ice shell and doesn't age. However, even with this I still feel the mc is too young for the story idea. If this does turn into a harem, then I will prob drop. For me, there are just way too many harem stories on this site already. Personally, any story that has a harem tag I don't even consider reading it... What I do love about this story is how unique the idea is. I haven't ever read something like this so am looking forward to it. As I said before the only problem (for me) is I feel the mc is way too young. Other than this the story has tons of potential.