I really admire your tenacity with which you write. It inspires me to keep improving my own writing skills which, after reading almost the entirety of your novel so far, I find I am sorely lacking. As far as criticism goes, there is none. Truly fantastic job. Praise though? No words exist to describe how truly pleased I am, after reading a lot of the garbage this site has to offer, that I found a hidden gem such as this. Thank you author and I wish you good luck in your writing career/hobby (not sure which lol). :)
Nightdrift
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