XystOblivion
A rondure or a palisade, your everything enclosed. Outside, an abysm, the looming consternation of insignificance.
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XystOblivion1yrReplied to Bone_GodYea… That’s honestly fair. I more specifically meant my father tho. He most definitely has the money to afford things but still does this anyway
Klein was planning on maintaining his gentlemanly image, but when he extended his hand with the one-gold pound note, he could not help but ask, "Can I get a discount?"- XystOblivion1yrReplied to Foxner
Yea, the first sentence is absolutely a run-on. Needs to be made into multiple sentences.
Maelyn Khadim gathered the students and colleagues that were to be accompanying her to the kingdom of Altinyn for the first archeological mission the kingdom had ever allowed to even set foot on the grounds of the historical ruins of their kingdom that had lasted for more than a thousand years while all of the others kingdoms had collapsed or grown so corrupt and complacent that their people had rebelled and overthrown the government. As they all assembled and grew quiet waiting for her to speak, Maelyn called their attention and started her final briefing of what the rules and customs they had to follow while in the kingdom, "Ok people! listen up! We are fixing to be taking flight to Altinyn and there's some things you all need to know before we take off. - XystOblivion2yrCommented
Ah yes, the most important of experiments and totally not a plot device so obviously erected by the author to drive the reason for the mc’s hatred of humanity.
"But this is simply torturing. The experiment is nothing but a way to see how much pain a human body can endure. It can even kill him if we are not careful!" Doctor Min argued. - XystOblivion2yrCommented
Dont think any sane human thinks like that but sure
"Their son turned out to be a waste that has no powers. I believe that if Zale and Clarisse were alive, even they too wouldn't want a son like that," General Maxwell said as he looked out the window. "I'm right, aren't I?" - XystOblivion2yrCommented
I cant wait to be dissapointed once again :)
Chapter 1: The boy who failed - XystOblivion2yrCommented
I certainly didn’t
"I had such high hopes for him." - XystOblivion2yrReplied to herohero
*you’re
In his right hand, a headless corpse. - XystOblivion3yrReplied to Isaiah_Colpitts
Also, the natural process of Phloria’s character development in this novel has always seemed unnatural to me. how does she go from a spoilt brat when lith first met her, to the “most grown up” out of all the main characters, especially when she has little no no life experiences which may facillitate this delicate but arduous process. It makes no sense to me and it feels completely artificial! The author manufactured this grown up character as a plot device to move lith’s character along on the path towards redemption. What a complete flop!
Invigoration or not, Lith felt the need to rest. Phloria was the only person beside Solus with whom he was able to lower his guard. He wanted to go outside the academy to relax and talk freely. - XystOblivion3yrReplied to Tariplar
And also, I do see a therapist and not for any reason you might believe. I’m not an evil person nor am I sadistic or morally abhorrent in any way. i simply have strong feelings toward certain characters that often are inflamed by their actions and the knowing author sitting behind them. i would be a bit more understanding if these were real events as there would be no grand orchestrator behind them. However, there is and it makes it all the worse when i think about some of the sh*t he has writeen in this novel.
Invigoration or not, Lith felt the need to rest. Phloria was the only person beside Solus with whom he was able to lower his guard. He wanted to go outside the academy to relax and talk freely. - XystOblivion3yrReplied to
Perhaps killing her is a bit overreactive, I just wish she was... Different. Even after reading another few hundred chapters she doesn’t get better in anyway that counts and the author even makes it worse by throwing some random woman into the mix. Completely useless plotwise and is a literal plaything for lith so that he can feel “normal”. Needless to say i dropped this novel at around chapter 600 and don’t plan on coming back. The author is disagreeable and prideful about his work which is a nasty combination. It makes one resistant to constructive criticism and outright hateful towards destructive criticism. I’ve talked to him on Discord before and that’s how I’ve deduced this.
Invigoration or not, Lith felt the need to rest. Phloria was the only person beside Solus with whom he was able to lower his guard. He wanted to go outside the academy to relax and talk freely. - XystOblivion3yrCommented
Well, I’m glad the free chapters ended here and not 10 chapters ago when i was still heavily invested in this novel. This chapter pretty much ruined it for me. The mc doesn’t need obligations like a dam pet to distract him. It adds senseless fluff to the story and contributes to an overall more boring reading experience. This isn’t suppossed to be a slice of life story why is this plot point here? Oh yeah, because the chinese authors want to drag out the story as long as possible to make as much monay as they possibly can. Huh, what a crazy thought...
What kind of pet is good? While pondering, Roy unconsciously drew a dog … - XystOblivion3yrCommented
Waste it on another useless skill. -_-
So, what can I do with a holy soul fragment? - XystOblivion3yrReplied to Cappycornio
Coming back to this a year later, that second sentence in my original comment sounds incredibly snarky. I apologize and I did not mean it to come out that way at all, I merely wanted to prove the validity of my statement.
These two figures were his real enemy, while Fang Yuan was just a small C grade talent; he was not on par. - XystOblivion3yrReplied to thewayofKABOOMMMMM
Why are you everywhere lol
The picture had a squatting little demon with dark red skin and pointy ears. In addition to the pair of just exposed pointed horns, he had a bunch of messy black fetal hair. He looked unexpectedly cute! - XystOblivion3yrCommented
In what way is this emulative of real life? Ugh, this novel is a low effort dumpster fire that i should have realized, because it is on this cursed site, that it never had a chance to be good in the first place.
"Leave him alone Harry; don't waste your words on the poor Rank F," Said a girl in a coquettish way while rubbing her breasts against the arm of the teenager named Harry. - XystOblivion3yrReplied to Precheur
Honestly though, I thought i was the only one
"Leave him alone Harry; don't waste your words on the poor Rank F," Said a girl in a coquettish way while rubbing her breasts against the arm of the teenager named Harry. - XystOblivion3yrCommented
If you can’t even afford the latest iphone, do you even deserve to live? 🧐
"Pfft, even though you've been a Blessed for so many years, you still have a HiPhone XX? Do you know how long this phone has been out of date? Does it still work to send messages?" One of the teenagers laughed at Noah's phone while putting his HiPhone ZY in the temporary closet used to store the Blessed's belongings. "Yeah, maybe the life of a Blessed Rank F doesn't pay that well..." The teenager laughed with disdain. - XystOblivion3yrCommented
Literally no one cares about these pointless details. We readers do have brains believe it or not and can probably guess these details based solely off context clues.
If they had been Blessed Rank D, surely his treatment of them would have been much better, since for the government, Blessed Rank F were just cannon fodder used to clean up the garbage that other adventurers thought was worthless. That is to say, the fortresses that are left to Rank F adventures yielded almost no profit, often almost not enough to have any money left at the end of the month. The only times that there was a little extra money left was when many people died during the invasion, so half of the profit of whoever died went to the family and the other half went to whoever stayed alive in the end. - XystOblivion3yrCommented
How are people absolutely okay with this atrocious quality of writing? It is literally boring me to tears! This novel is a cool concept for sure (I wouldn’t have picked it up otherwise) but the lazy chains of mediocrity and rushed writing drag this great concept down and makes it equal with the rest of the trash that makes up 90% of this app.
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