Yeah i am not going to lie this is pretty shit. The MC is cringe worthy as ****, i mean he goes around saying “I am Revolt.” Like that is his catchphrase. Eurgh, the devil fruits he chose are pretty odd as well, but ah well that isn’t my choice it is up to the author. Idk man, your dialogue is really awkward and doesnt make much sense. I wouldnt recommend it but each to their own.
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