The story has vast potential, but the mc's are contradictory towards his background. 1. he is a retired spy at 20? yet he makes so many mistakes regarding keeping thing secret that is mind boggling. 2. he is a crafter and you experience barely any crafting. 3. any women that shows up he become subservient. 4. he cultivates yet he doesn't claim to be a cultivator, where it could had solve a few headaches. 5. the conflicts feel force. Other than that you get the same xianxia crap with young masters, trying to harm mc over petty things.it was very interesting at first but once the women started to show up his intelligence took a nose dive, and became just like any other xianxia, nothing new really, which is sad.
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