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Review Detail of CCmei in Pathway

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A true xianxia novel alright! If you're into cultivation, details, and solid universe with no BS or cheap egotistical power fantasy hijinks this is for you. Personally, it reads too stiff for my taste and there are parts which read like a young monk practicing writing scriptures, a worthy and good practice but not yet there at sounding wise/pleasing/beautiful. They're tying though- definitely trying. Too unnaturally stiff even if there are little grammatical errors and the dialogue is well thought out. It's also very heavy on the details. I respect that because obviously that's a lot of well thought out efforts bit it hits you with walls of info. Great if you're into technical cultivation and a fan of the genre. (if you're a casual reader who just wants convenient magic and some butt whooping then no). Another reader asked if this was 'Slice of Life' but I don't see it, instead I see it's a very detailed world-building. Don't try to fulfill WN's great appetite for immediate satisfaction for action and seeming randomness here. Overall very quality work but can be an info overload if you're not a fan of this genre. I saw no holes in the building thus far but it is too wooden and rheumatic. The storyline could be more personable but that's just my tastes.

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Thanks so much my friend, you are an immortal. I really aporeciate your input. Will work more on it. Thanks again.