Review Detail of Rovontheus in Reborn as Vegeta

Honestly, its hard to find a decent grammar like this but the execution is quite poor like speech and some small stuff. The dragon ball is made way too op even though its not and the mc thinks himself as vegeta and hes like i cant wait to meet my wife? Dude bulma is cannon vegeta wife just bcus u took over vegeta body dont talk as if shes your wife he totally accept hes vegeta. Cannon bulma likes bad bois thats the reason why she keeps up with cannon vegeta and develop a relationship although she can be charmed with one mere look still the way you execute is too poor its cringe and forced. But i must say it have alot of potential