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racecarsthegodcar
racecarsthegodcarLv143yr
2022-02-24 09:44

was good until arthor did a crossover with the other fanfic it’s bs that you did that ruined the story in my opinion also power scaling is way off i don’t care if other mc had a system there is no way in the naruto world

Reborn as Vegeta

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