At the beginning, I was a little confused. Too much information came at once but everything surprisingly was really interesting. It was telling the ancient trading system and how business actually worked in that era. The way the author pictured the world settings was through how the transactions and how this people behaved. This is a different read than others. Slowly characters were being introduced. There were also author notes explaining some of the terms that he used within the chapters (terms of business or terms of greetings). And those description made it easier to understand the story. Thank you for introducing this novel to me.

Part of review swap, this author is a grammar guru, maybe it's my eyes, but I couldn't detect a single error 😂😂 (I'm jealous). The flow is nice, this genre is not my kinda thingy, but for those who are interested in this type of genre, I strongly recommend that you tried this. I appreciate the effort of the author in this story, and i wish you good luck 💪💪💪💪

This type of novel is new to me and it has information about the merchants. You have a good grammar and it's easy to read. I've put it to my reading list just in case

At the time of writing this review, I had read only 5th chapter. Hence, I am giving an interim review. After reading many more chapters another review from me will be posted here. I have saved the book in my library to easily locate and read. The information given from the beginning is immense. People interested in the life of merchants would be indeed happy to read it. New authors may be able to enhance their knowledge and also get inspired to include in their story. The writing is clear and explains the life of the merchant community. Something that one would not have learnt in school or college. The writing quality is excellent, I did not see any mistakes, Stability of updates is equally great as many chapters have already been written. Character design and the World background seems to be well defined. I am expecting the development of the story to be excellent too. I like your book cover. It seems you drew it. There are more books by the author, will see those too. I wish the author all the best.

It's quite interesting. Haven't read a plot like this before. It's rare to find a novel like this. So far so good. Just need to do more on your imagination. Keep it up author ! :D

I'm giving this a 5 for the sheer wealth of information it provides for anyone interested in the old merchant life. This is a good resource for those of us who are also interested in adding a merchantile aspect to our story... The writing is great and clearly explains what would have been a very difficult history lesson in an easily understandable manner. Well done on the author's part for making these series of tales great enough that you don't feel an overload of information while you read it. You've got one new follower, for sure. Thanks and keep it up!

Well, it took some time for me but finally made it. It very interisting work to bring the issue. Keep a good work on writing and try to sometimes explore the potential of your current work. That's all I can say, thanks.

I'm giving this book 5 stars because I think the author is very intelligent, it takes only an intelligent mind to created a book such as this. Your grammar is good, honestly I didn't find any throughout reading chapter 1 to ten and you said English is your third language ..Wow.

Wow. The first thing that came into my mind was China's landmark hahaha. Brilliant plot just needs some more editing when it comes to format and capitalization. Good job! Looking forward for this book's completion. Please give mine a try too --- 'War Grounds' is the title. Cheers!