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May1st
May1stLv145yr
2019-08-11 18:52

Part of review swap, this author is a grammar guru, maybe it's my eyes, but I couldn't detect a single error 😂😂 (I'm jealous). The flow is nice, this genre is not my kinda thingy, but for those who are interested in this type of genre, I strongly recommend that you tried this. I appreciate the effort of the author in this story, and i wish you good luck 💪💪💪💪

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Gourmet_DAO
Gourmet_DAOAuthor

Thanks for your review and time spent. Alas, my English is far from perfect! But the topic is very interesting. Respect!

May1st
May1stLv14

What topic?

Gourmet_DAO:Thanks for your review and time spent. Alas, my English is far from perfect! But the topic is very interesting. Respect!
Gourmet_DAO
Gourmet_DAOAuthor

What topic? - Silk Road!

May1st:What topic?
May1st
May1stLv14

Silk road? XD Your writing skill is cool, but I'm not a fan of history, I'm into romance and horror, i don't want to pretend and review that I'm definitely gonna stick to it and all.

Gourmet_DAO:What topic? - Silk Road!
Gourmet_DAO
Gourmet_DAOAuthor

Of course I understand you very well. I am a fan of history and the Silk Road, romance bothers me, but I like fantasy in the style of Ursul Le Guin ... Of course, a fan of one genre, will not be able to delve into another, much less enthusiastically read it. It is possible only in the future but not a fact. So each of us will read what he likes and that’s good, freedom of choice is great!

May1st:Silk road? XD Your writing skill is cool, but I'm not a fan of history, I'm into romance and horror, i don't want to pretend and review that I'm definitely gonna stick to it and all.
May1st
May1stLv14

When you said the topic is interesting, respect! I knew you were being sarcastic xd

Gourmet_DAO:Of course I understand you very well. I am a fan of history and the Silk Road, romance bothers me, but I like fantasy in the style of Ursul Le Guin ... Of course, a fan of one genre, will not be able to delve into another, much less enthusiastically read it. It is possible only in the future but not a fact. So each of us will read what he likes and that’s good, freedom of choice is great!
Gourmet_DAO
Gourmet_DAOAuthor

It's great to be able to see through people)) or understand the context

May1st:When you said the topic is interesting, respect! I knew you were being sarcastic xd
May1st
May1stLv14

So, it's true? Uwu

Gourmet_DAO:It's great to be able to see through people)) or understand the context
Gourmet_DAO
Gourmet_DAOAuthor

Since I know my level of English, no matter how I would not like to say otherwise, the grammar is lame, there are errors. You were so kind as not to indicate it directly. That's what swap review ethics mean :)))

May1st:When you said the topic is interesting, respect! I knew you were being sarcastic xd
Gourmet_DAO
Gourmet_DAOAuthor

Not really. The actual topic of the Silk Road is very interesting! But I was also somewhat surprised by your comment on my excellent grammar ... which is clearly already going overboard)) On the other hand, you said so subtly about this that it delighted me, from your ethics and ability to subtly say in context , What did you mean. Something like this.

May1st:So, it's true? Uwu
May1st
May1stLv14

Ok then, the flow of your writting is nice to me, maybe because I sucks at grammar, I find yours amazing xd. Don't be angry with me uwu, waaaaaaaahhhhh😢

Gourmet_DAO:Not really. The actual topic of the Silk Road is very interesting! But I was also somewhat surprised by your comment on my excellent grammar ... which is clearly already going overboard)) On the other hand, you said so subtly about this that it delighted me, from your ethics and ability to subtly say in context , What did you mean. Something like this.
Gourmet_DAO
Gourmet_DAOAuthor

I am not a special connoisseur of English grammar. English is my third language. Using programs such as grammar checking are paid, so ... not available. But in general I need to learn grammar)))

May1st:Ok then, the flow of your writting is nice to me, maybe because I sucks at grammar, I find yours amazing xd. Don't be angry with me uwu, waaaaaaaahhhhh😢
May1st
May1stLv14

That's cool, so you're not angry with me ursus senpai 😇😇

Gourmet_DAO:I am not a special connoisseur of English grammar. English is my third language. Using programs such as grammar checking are paid, so ... not available. But in general I need to learn grammar)))
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