Review Detail of ErozothDraeor in Vampire Primogenitor in Tokyo Ghoul Universe

tldr: Does not deserve to be read. Writing Quality: 4/5. The quality itself is amazing, top notch but I had to take down one star due to the author insistent on not making proper paragraphs. Each chapter is very long but also a wall of text, you get used to it but it shows laziness. Updates: 3/5. Its good but not amazing. Story: 2/5. It is interesting but relays heavily on existing novels and mainly involves killing so nothing special. Character Design: 2/5. Other than the MC there are no constant characters with personality or you dont talk to them enough to see it. World background: 1/5. Does not even deserve a single star. This is a matter of opinion of course, some would think it deserve more but I do not because: As you can see by the name its a Fan fiction. The MC starts in TG, where with in 12 chapters he promptly goes to KILL all the main characters of the original, the reason given is to "get stronger", it makes sense but from my perspective this simply indicates the author is in a way stealing work and lazy, reasons? Fan fic in general are about improving, building on or changing the original story while maintaining the original feel of the story. Here the author blatantly uses this world that someone else created as a stepping stone of his own story, see the above about killing all the main characters the fans of the original work grew to love. From what the author explained this will be very similar in every other world the MC will go: naruto, academia, etc - to be clear I have no idea which world he will go to but the MC is on the evil and self interest side. Other than the fact I would not enjoy reading about this two bit MC killing a lot characters I like I strongly feel this story does NOT deserve for me to read it. If you are going to shiit all over the original story and simply use it to progress yours its just stealing, since you are too lazy to create a new world with a fleshed out background or not talented enough. I was enjoying this novel up to that point, as it can be seen I am just angry someone has the nerve to write this. If you have any respect for original content creators do not read this. (Not to say its the only novel, there a few others that do the same, like re-incarnation and go off to kill the original MC, I drop those on the spot too).