Review Detail of Chocolate_Dip in The Birth of a Monster (The First Vampire I)

I'll rate this properly again after reading, but I just gotta tell you Author, you got a typo in your summary. You wrote peice instead of piece ^^" I don't mean to come off as a grammar nazi (normally I don't even care for such minor typos) but since it's in the summary, something people read before starting the novel itself, I thought it'd be good to inform you lol. But anyways, after reading your story imma edit this (can I do that? idk I never tried) or delete, idk. We'll see