Chocolate_Dip
For now I'm just here bc of Supreme Magus. But who knows, maybe I'll find another original story worth reading and spending SS on. Edit: Yes, I did. 'Birth of the demonic Sword' and 'Is that a Wisp?'
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Chocolate_Dip5mthCommentedFive paragraphs above, it said a dozen minutes passed. Idk if you know this or not Author, but a dozen minutes is 12 minutes. So obviously... 10 minutes already passed. But eh.
And even the holy crosses didn't work on him because of The Blood Sovereign System granting him the ten times buff in physical strength which also raised his resilience to this force.- Chocolate_Dip5mthCommented
Sherlock would be so proud of your revelation
"It was all part of his plan!" - Chocolate_Dip5mthReplied to Chocolate_Dip
...its disappointing, to say the least.
The moon shone from high above in the clear night sky, giving off a gentle glow. But, in the abandoned streets filled with nothing but a sense of quietness, that glow turned out to become uncanny and sinister instead of the gentleness that it would've normally represented. - Chocolate_Dip5mthCommented
I think its so... comical how Shuri is literally a renowned lawer teaching at an University, she cares deeply for Adams mother yet cant seem to pay a dime for her or her son. Make it make sense Author...
'I need money… A great deal of money.' - Chocolate_Dip5mthCommented
Alright... started off so good but I'm seeing too many cringe stereotypes. I'll read some more but I *really* hope the female side characters dont turn out to be bland and with no depth😮💨
A foreign student originating from Russia. - Chocolate_Dip7mthReplied to Makaroshka
No he isn't. He WAS. Now he's just a kid with no powers whatsoever. He may still have an adult mind, but he LOST his cultivation.
To an observer, it might appear that Asher was a king. The first thing he noticed was his renewed youth. He had died at the age of 27, yet he now found himself back in his 13-year-old body. - Chocolate_Dip8mthCommented
I always love your rhymes :)
Today, despite seeing burning flesh, he felt utterly fresh. - Chocolate_Dip8mthCommentedSylvester noticed visible annoyance in Bishop Norman Spring's mannerisms whenever the latter would look at him. The scent and the taste also helped in judging the situation. Then, from how he treated Romel, it became apparent that something was going on between him and Romel Riveria.
- Chocolate_Dip8mthCommented
Boy how are you making me cry at the first chapter T-T
Photographs of the scene circulated around the world, all over the internet. It was the power of mass media, and he quickly became the greatest symbol of the fight against the corrupt people in power. - Chocolate_Dip8mthCommentedSuddenly, every single mobile phone in that area, whoever it belonged to, rang with notifications. Some took out their phones and glanced; there was a message with a link. A few daring ones clicked on it and found a live stream of a handsome old man speaking. His face looked wrinkled, the signs of ageing and weariness.
- Chocolate_Dip8mthPosted
This novel is very worth reading if you like smart/genius MCs. Though the grammar in the first 30 or so chapters varies from atrocious to readable, it's worth to continue reading, because the author gets a lot better. What I think really saves this story is the story developement. The author has a way of increasing your excitement for what the MC is doing, or planning to do. Because most of the time, we aren't told what exactly the MC is doing and have chances to guess. But we will undoubtedly find out as all the pieces crash together into beautiful and evil chaos. All in all, hard to get into, but very worth it for the thrills.
- Chocolate_Dip9mthReplied to BrabbitX
Author has a memory problem sometimes, there were a lots of things that were forgotten or interpreted differently when mentioned again🤷♂️
He still needed a bath because he was covered in the blood of the Rockeaters previously. Although the nano armor was designed to make sure no lingering residue was left, if not for the function of the suit, the twins would have to travel in a different car altogether. The stench of monster blood was strong and was not a pleasant one at all. - Chocolate_Dip9mthReplied to Unknownking6869
Ikr know right..
[Fate reward is greater the more fate you have and lesser the less fate you have.] - Chocolate_Dip9mthCommented
Isn't MC her younger brother?
"Why don't you shout like that at your older brother? It seems young people only tend to bully weak old men nowadays," Nathan said while acting pitiful. - Chocolate_Dip9mthCommented
Author, I dont know if you continue to do this in the future, but stop reffering the the world Asher lives in as "this world". It breaks immersion. This is the ONLY world we know of in this story.
After some time, Asher's Nano-Armor arrived. This world was technologically advanced, and even though mana allowed people to create miracles, humans still combined mana with technology to create a better environment for the masses. The Nano-Armor was one such invention. - Chocolate_Dip9mthReplied to Chocolate_Dip
or like looking at a calendar or something lol
To an observer, it might appear that Asher was a king. The first thing he noticed was his renewed youth. He had died at the age of 27, yet he now found himself back in his 13-year-old body. - Chocolate_Dip9mthCommented
okay but how does he know exactly how old he is? Sure it's his body but I feel like he wouldnt know how old he is just because of that, as far as we know, he wasn't told how far into the past he was brought. I think having him ask for the current date would've been a better introduction to his age
To an observer, it might appear that Asher was a king. The first thing he noticed was his renewed youth. He had died at the age of 27, yet he now found himself back in his 13-year-old body. - Chocolate_Dip2yrCommented
Other side of the ceiling (?) So, the surface? But it didn't seem like they were reaching the surface just yet? God, I'm confused too much rn. I can't imagine that passage at all. Maybe I'm too tired or something
Khan struggled a bit to find the proper position that could suit the task. Yet, the passage was too narrow, so his chest ended up sliding on some sharp rocks before actually moving to the other side of the ceiling. - Chocolate_Dip2yrCommented
I'm still confused as to why they had to go there by foot instead of just using their Aduns. Like- why would you walk over a suspicious/dangerous area when you could just fly over it... And even if they HAD to walk there (for some reason I cannot explain) why tf would they not immeditely call their Aduns to pick them up, instead of walking that risky way back? But welp. Not like it's gonna ruin the book for me. RIP those two Niqols who died for plot advancement tho :'<
The group didn't care about going directly to the surface. It was enough for their Aduns to have a clear path, and the rescue mission would be a success. Crossing the ceiling and jumping on the first stable area that gave them a clear view of the outside world was everything they had ever needed.