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DragoPackMan
DragoPackManLv44yr
2020-06-02 22:45

I liked this story very much, mc is cool and he gained his power for 110 years of trainning and after absorbing Hallow his physical body strentend and his natural healing increased to unknown level this is author told us, And he had a fight with captain commander on nearly equal term and his physical power increased again after he heals, Then he strength his physical power again but strengthening his sword, This is what author told us but he destroyed everything in a name of arrogance ☆cool image build up after 80+ chapter shattered ☆his heighly good sense gone to garbage by surprise attack ( in which ichigo shouted BANKAI) ☆is defense sucks even after this much stentening ☆he can't even able to relate to ichigo's attack Totally every thing and every interest and expectation I had for this mc and novel got crushed in single chapter called ARROGANCE which should've probably appeared before he absorb the hallow I read 2 more chapter after that to see how author going to manage this blunder. But disappointed.

Rebirth in Bleach

DemonicPanda
4.5
124 Chs

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DragoPackMan
DragoPackManLv4

Sorry so much spelling mistakes and other mistakes I typed this review in frustration so bear with it

4yr
3
Amv_125
Amv_125Lv3

I know right!! The author never even mentioned the term "arrogance" before, let alone associate it to the mc. This was sooo goddamned sudden and out of the blue, just because the author wanted a reason for the mc to train. But the most bs thing is that, even after strengthing by absorbing a hollow stated to be "faaaaaar stronger" than ichigo's own by isshin himself through a far more efficient mean he STILL gets hurt by a weakling like ichigo. Remind you that this is the same mc who strengthened AFTER fighting yamamoto to a standstill! And this is the same ichigo BEFORE even the hecuo mundo(spelling lol) arc. This is bull and we all know it.Aizen was able to stop hollow ichigo's attack with just one finger! ONE FINGER!! And our mc who is supposed to be stronger than that gets hurt just because he had his senses nerfed for ichigo to pull something out of his ass for a convenient excuse to make the mc train, which is not even convenient.

4yr
22
Juhiko
JuhikoLv6

I drop this fic for that reason I try to continue but I couldn't so I drop

4yr
11
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Zephir_
Zephir_Lv5

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timursgimranovs
timursgimranovsLv12

Finally another Bleach fan-fiction with a huge potential. The setting and timeline for the MC's reincarnation was chosen perfectly. He doesn't get OP really fast as MC need time to control his super powers. P.S. So far so good, but please don't turn this potential amazing novel into another useless Harem Bleach Story as this is not what Bleach about. MC having few lovers is fine, and other women complementing on MC's appearance, but not every woman must become his wive.

5yr
Fanficismyheaven
FanficismyheavenLv15

He who fights with monsters should look to it that he himself does not become a monster. And if you gaze long into an abyss, the abyss also gazes into you.                                                           -Friedrich Nietzsche

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An_Kr
An_KrLv2

For those who want to invest their time , i warn you cause it's not worth it in my opinion this shit is disappointing, just read the part where author suddenly nerfs the mc for " weak "ichigo . and you cant even own up to your mistake and try to defend it when mc had so many advantages and trained for more than 100 years but suddenly ichigo was able to hurt him when he is still weak in the timeline. keep on sucking off ichigos dick mate.

4yr
Melshan
MelshanLv7

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5yr
Nyx_Celeste
Nyx_CelesteLv6

Guys, be alert. This story is a clickbait who wanting an OP mc. Apparently its not, we've been lied by this sadistic author. Author has a track record in making his character nerfed so much that its kinda illegal to do so with all that experiences and power the MC acquired. Only to end up reducing like stupid ass bean bag.

4yr
After_Wing
After_WingLv6

Nothing personal author. Dropping this for something it hurts for me seeing such well-written MC nerfed so much like you hate your own OC so much.

4yr
I_N_C_O_G_N_I_TO
I_N_C_O_G_N_I_TOLv2

Guy gets all kinds of power ups and advantage of canon knowledge only to get done in by Ichigo in seconds lol guy got humiliated in front of his harem.

5yr
Nameless_Godless
Nameless_GodlessLv5

Like most FanFiction lately the author made a choice that I find stupid and disagree with and like most FanFiction this choice was by making a character already in the in the series go outside their limits it was ichigo I personally don't hate ichigo but I do see alot of people overestimate his growth speed while fast it has shown it's limits most notably with bat boy where not old man zangetsu nor shiro zangetsu but the remnants of WHITE'S instincts had to step in to save him as of chapter 92 he injured our Mc with a suprise attack! Which doesn't make sense our Mc is the Captain of the stealth unit known for stealth and detection so the mere idea that he couldn't sense absolutely everything the person who is known as the worst character in the entire series at hiding and controlling his energy is laughable even if he underestimated him with the time it takes to transform a normal bleach character would be prepared let alone our with his increased mental abilitys it seem to be a common thing now to spit in the face of the Mc's efforts I will still read this but it has gone from 'The must read it as soon as it comes out.' Pile to the 'Read it if i have nothing else.' Pile

5yr
Master_Sigil
Master_SigilLv6

Sorry dropping this as well. Author has nerfed MC so much that its somewhat it become a parody. I'm really sorry. This is even lower than I ever thought.

4yr
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