Review Detail of Mamelunka in On The Turn Of a Dime

Wow. Just wow. This story is only one chapter long but it has everything - the characters, the background, (well described background is my greatest struggle in writing so I admire everyone who has the ability to do this). Stories that take place in our world during real events like war require from author to start them by doing huge reserach on the topic. You chose really challenging genre but pulled it off perfectly. I'm trurly amazed. Great work!