Review Detail of EidenSensei in On The Turn Of a Dime

Personally, I love a dark story, so, I'm used to the death and all, but, how you pieced together the story, was amazing and actually made me cry. I love how you wrote about the background, adding a sorrowful mood, but, somehow didn't make the overall story sad, the ending is what really got me. (Sorry if my review didn't make any sense.)